Video evaluation

This is our video evaluation which is evaluated by Kashif Zaman.

Audience Feedback

We have shown our film to our target audience and they have given us video feedback of what they thought of the film and given us a review. We have chosen two people to make it more fair.

Codes And Conventions Of Film Opening

The codes of a film opening would be mostly technical codes due to mostly being designed and also edited on computers. A film opening will also have symbolic codes as in the openings the characters will have symbolic codes to signify to the audience whether they are the good guys or bad guys. For example, in The Incredibles opening scene, they are wearing the similar designed clothing and the same colour which is red which suggests to the audience that they are on the same team. The colour is symbolic as it could show that they are the bad guys as red is associated with blood, fire and various other things which are mainly considered evil with the colour red. Even though the opening is done solely on computer, you can still find symbolic codes such as the clothing and colours. In the opening it shows you what genre the film is as it is an animation and the opening is done on computer which suggests to the audience that the film will be an animation. In the opening sequence you see the characters mostly fighting/martial arts which suggests that it will be an action film aswell as fighting connotes to the audience that there will be lots of fights scenes and that its an action animation film. The costumes suggest to the audience that it might also be a superhero film. Film openings usually have the companies logo in order to show that they own the film so we would expect the pixar or Disney logo to be present in the incredibles opening scene but instead the logo of the incredibles is shown which suggests that they want the logo of the incredibles to be instantly recognisable.

Another thing which audiences will expect from a film opening is the title credits and cast. The incredibles opening scene does show the cast and who will do the voice overs for which character and also includes the names of the people who created the film for example the director Brad Bird. The opening also depicts what will happen in the film without essentially ruining the plot. The opening does this by showing random fights from the film just as a film trailer would do. We can see in the opening sequence that the team who are most likely to be the incredibles (due to them wearing red as it is the main color in the opening) fighting a giant robot which suggests to the audience that the robot will most likely be the bad guy or that it might be a weapon used by another party.

we can compare the opening of the incredibles to the opening of iron man and see similar things:

we can see that both openings are done on computer where they have been edited. Both depict what the movie will be about such as iron man depicting a robot or a man in an iron suit which depicts that it will be futuristic or be an action film. Also both include casting credits and titles which is what most film openings have.

Filmography: The Incredibles

Year: 2004

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0317705/

Filmography: Iron man

year: 2008

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0371746/

The opening sequences for the two examples:

The Incredibles -

Iron Man -

Kallams Return Final Version - Re-edited

This is the final version of our film which we have slightly re-edited. In the final version we decided to edit the ending title and also have added a little whisper at the end where Kallam confirms that he will get his revenge on the bullies. The whisper at the end makes the film less confusing to the audience as they now know why he attacked one of the bullies (Farhan) at the beginning of the film which is set one month after the rest of the movie and the rest of the movie is told in flashback. The whisper at the end also counts as dialogue which is good as we don't have that much dialogue but just enough to understand what is happening in the plot.

Kallams Return - Draft

This is the draft of our horror film. In the film the protagonist Kallam is tormented and bullied by three of his classmates and when they push Kallam too far he turns the tables and exacts revenge. In our film we have done various different camera shots and angles but the shot we mainly wanted for our film was the first person view where Kallam is on the swings and can see his tormentors approaching and also the heavy breathing as they come near signifies that Kallam is terrified of them. we had to retake the scene where Kallam is on the swings as he found it tricky to keep the handheld camera steady whilst swinging and me, Farhan and Kashif also found it hard to get the timing right to walk into the shot. We also edited the lighting in the park scene to make it seem darker and grittier than it actually is. For our final scene we decided to have the setting in the woods as the trees naturally cause the surroundings to be dim which causes a more eerie effect to the audience and connotes that something bad will happen. The story is being told in flashback and tells the story of why Kallam decides to kill the bullies. We have also added casting names to our characters when they appear on screen so the audience know who they are and also the names are in specific colour such as red for the bullies to signify they are evil and associated with violence as red is the colour of blood. For Kallam we have chosen a bright blue colour to signify he is the protagonist. The clothing in the final scene shows Kallam in white which is associated with good but when he puts on the mask his clothes are now black which suggest he has had a change of heart and has turned evil.

Preliminary Final

This is our final preliminary video we have done. In the draft there was no dialogue which was replaced by texting on mobile phones but we have changed it from the draft and we have added dialogue instead of texts. In our draft we experimented with different camera angles and shots and learned which would make our preliminary more enjoyable instead of linear and bland. We had to consider which shots we wanted to make the audience feel that they are following the character as he gets a phone call.

Animatic final

This is our final media story board animatic which we have done for our film. Our draft we made was too confusing as to what the plot was. My group have added more detail to the story board such as adding in curtains and desks to show that it is a classroom. Also we have colored each character in a certain colour as to make it clear as to what is going on. We also show how the flashback will work in our film as we start the film in the present day as shown in the story board and then we flash back to a month before to set out the plot and why there is a killer on the loose.

Our filming timetable

mood board

We have developed a mood board where we show the themes of our film. The main themes of our film are kidnap, torture, death and violence. My group have picked these due to the themes relating to horror. Our mood board shows our film will be horror as we see gravestones with two ghosts hovering over which suggests that our film will involve the supernatural and include death as gravestones represent death. Next to the graves we see two men scrapping in a brawl which suggests violence will play a part in our film and that we aim to give the feel of an adrenaline rush throughout our film. We also show various characters in masks which means that our film will have some representation of evil in a mask as to show that the film will be about killers aswell as supernatural beings. The blood that is drawn throughout our mood board shows that our film will be gruesome and that violence will play a key part in our film. The writing we have put across our mood board connotes what will happen in our film and suggests that there will be murders and killers on the loose.

preliminary research draft

this is our preliminary research task where we had to film. The filming was done by Ehsham Javed, Farhan Mohammed, Kallam Hussain and Kashif Zaman. Only Farhan and Kallam did the acting and during the beginning there was a problem with some shots missing which meant that the entire scene had to be redone. This was the only problem we had the first time but after we had made this mistake then we decided to start a new script in order for more dialogue to be used as there wasn't enough on our first script. The end result was that our script helped our new film to look much better and overall more entertaining than the first script we made and we practiced different camera angles and shots in our first take which meant for the second take we knew which angles and shots to go with.

Preliminary research task

Film Editing

In film, editing is very important as it can make you edit a film in any way you want such as cutting out things that you don't want in your film and adding sequences together to make a series of events that you shot in a week, look like it all happened in a day. Editing can be a whole range of things such as slowing down set movements which makes things appear in slow-motion or adding special effects such as the title or writing on the screen and explosions and computer generated image ( CGI ) where you can add anything in your film through a computer. People who edit are called editors and they are mainly used to edit films such as cutting clips and adding images and then putting sequences together to make a film.

This is one of the older black and white films and is an example of bad editing as you can clearly see when the shot ends and then the screen blacks out before going to a new shot and this will slow down the story and keep the film boring.


Continuity Editing

Continuity Editing is a style of film editing and video editing used in the post-production of filmaking. The reason continuity editing is used is so that the discontinuity can be smoothed over and to edit shots together to make a sequence of events happen straight after each other and to get footage which was shot in a week and fit it into a few minutes of film. Continuity editing helps the film to flow through sequences and events and this keeps the audience engaged with the story and understand what is happening in the film. Editors put clips together to make a film and so when watching one clip, it smoothes into the next clip without pause so the audience understand what is going on in the film and can follow the sequence of events. Continuity editing is important in filmaking and good for the story and plot as it doesn't get confusing plus in modern film you cannot notice the changes when a clip cuts into the next. With continuity editing you can suggest to the audience that the camera simply changes angles during a single event when really its a series of different shots. Also match on action is when something happens in the scene and when there is a cut then this shows to the audience that the action is still going on and is an important part in helping the audience to keep up and understand what is happening. This is an example of continuity editing.
Continuaty editing is divided up into two categories:

Temporal editing

This is when you connect shots together in order to create and support a narrative so the audience will not get confused with the plot of the film and to keep the flow going between shots. The shots can be linear in order to create a simple linear progression in a film or can include flashbacks or flash forwards to show the audience that a significant amount of time has passed from one shot to the next and also can improve on the narrative by showing what has happened in the past or what will happen in the future in a films narrative.

Spatial editing
This editing creates unified space through the editing. shots from different angles & framing. Shot / reverse shots. also kuleshove effect this also includes something known as parrelel editing.
180 degree rule

this is when you are filming a shot and the camera is on one side. an example of this is if there are two people on stage so the camera can only be on one side of the 180 degree rule as to make it seem more realistic.

Reverse shot


this is a shot where the camera is placed behind a character who is looking off screen at another character and then the camera is placed behind the second character as if to show the second character is looking back at the first. This technique is used to show that the characters are looking in opposite directions at each other and this shows the audience that the two characters are facing each other.

Filmography: homicide ( television series )
year: 1949
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0041482/

Filmography: great train robbery
year: 1903
http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0000439/

Developed treatment

Setting

The main setting for our film is going to be the park where Kallam goes to spend time alone by himself and where he can escape the torment which he suffers from the bullies. The park has many different areas, mainly we chose to film at first the swings during the daytime to show Kallam where he feels most comfortable and then the second area being covered in more trees and isolated from the rest of the park which creates tension and gives a sense of danger as it is an secluded area and is also unfamiliar to Kallam which will make him feel uncomfortable and also due to there being more trees in the secluded area, there is less light which gives it an eerie feeling.

Protagonist and antagonist

The protagonist for our film is a weak, geeky sixth former who is bullied which will cause the audience to sympathize with him and also relate to as many people have been bullied in their lives. Throughout the film, the protagonist will be bullied more and more until he is killed and then comes back to life and decides to exact revenge on his tormentors which will cause the audience to like him more as he stands up to the bullies and takes revenge. By the end of the film the protagonist will be an opposition of how he was at the beginning as he becomes the tormentor rather than the tormented.

The antagonists for our film will be three bullies who stick together and torment peoples lives simply out of the pleasure of seeing other people suffer and to make other people feel bad for their own insecurities. They will show their behavior and personality through their actions to intimidate and physically harm their victims. They usually dress in dark clothing to reflect their personalities. 

Three act structure

1. The setup : the set up for our film is, Kallam the protagonist arrives to college and wants to do his work and try to ignore the bullies who constantly harass him. 

2. The setback : Kallam is on the swings at the park where he is free from his tormentors but the antagonists find him and then beat him up and nearly kill him. Then they find him another day and beat him again in a secluded area of the park and kill him for good.

3. The resolution : The protagonist rises from the dead and dons a new identity which he uses to exact revenge on his tormentors and kill them.

Theory :

Binary opposition - The binary opposition we have chosen for our film is weak vs strong and the reason we have chosen this is to show the everyday struggle between weaker people such as victims of bullying and the stronger people who are the bullies. This is a good opposite mainly because the audience can relate to the struggle between the weak and the strong and how the weak can triumph and become the strong through acts of forceful revenge and motivation.

Character type :

In our film the protagonist will be believable to the audience as he will be a victim of bullying which will also cause the audience to feel sympathy for him and want him to take revenge on the bullies and as bullying is a part of most peoples lives, the audience will be able to relate more to him and understand how his feeling throughout the film. The protagonist will soon be killed by his bullies but return to life in order to exact revenge and will then become an anti-hero as he kills the bullies in violent ways and shows no sympathy towards them, the same way they showed none towards him and he will then reflect how the bullies made his life hell but now he is making their lives hell and he will portray conventions of the horror film genre as he will wear a grotesque mask while killing his tormentors in order to show that he has a new identity as a murderer. The antagonists will consist of:

Ehsham - He is the biggest of the three bullies and the most physically intimidating due to size and stature yet is only the wing-man in the group. He likes to verbally taunt the protagonist with insults in order to impress others around him.

Farhan - He is the leader of the group even though he is the smallest in size and he mainly uses mind games to get what he wants from people. The other bullies are afraid of him due to his aggression and fearfulness and is the bully who beats up the protagonist to near death.

Kashif - He is the outcast among the bullies as he goes along with them just so he can fit in with a group. He is the weakest of the three and is the only bully who wants to change his ways and doesn't have any resentment towards the protagonist.

Equilibrium theory

Equilibrium - the protagonist arrives to college and proceeds to do his work as he usually does and gets verbally taunted by the antagonists.

Disequilibrium - The antagonist start physically attacking the protagonist and eventually kill him

New state of equilibrium - Kallam comes back to life in order to exact revenge on the antagonists.